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I opened my eyes, because I heard that my younger sister was crying, and I realized that we had arrived to the location that has a good view and it is around 12.30 AM. “Allison what happened to April?”my mom asked to my older sister. “I didn’t know mom, April suddenly cried when we arrived here.” Then my mom’s facial expression changed into confusion, but then I ignored it.

My dad went out from the car to search for a restroom, but then he couldn’t find it. So he decided to urinate under the tree, because he couldn’t hold it anymore. After that I went to the café with Allison, April, my dad, and my cousin- Mison. My mom, uncle, and aunty went to the restroom. Yes, they found the restroom.

My mom and aunty went to swimming pool area to take a picture, while Me, Allison, April, Mison, my dad, and uncle gathered at the café. I felt something weird, but I try to ignore it, because I thought it’s only how I felt. Then my mom and aunty went back to the café. Then we gathered there to finish our food. After that we decided to go home. But before we went to the parking lot my aunty asked us to take a picture first with the beautiful views background. When we took the picture I felt something weird and I got a goosebumps, but I thought maybe because of we took a picture below an old tree, and it was already around 01.00 AM. Then we went the parking lot, and Allison and I decided to join Mison’s car. When my uncle backed up the car, we felt like we were run over something. All of us were really panic, because we thought that maybe we run over the cat. So my uncle went out from the car to check it out, but then my uncle couldn’t found anything under the car tires. So he went in to the car and told us that he couldn’t found anything under the tires. Allison, Mison, I ignored it and we fell asleep.

I opened my eyes, because of Allison woke me up, and I realized that we had arrived to our destination; it is my other uncle’s house, but actually we were going back to the hotel. But because we planned that the next day we will immediately leave, so we decide to visit our family first. So we went in to my uncle house. Allison, Mison, April, and I played with our cousins; Angel and Aidan in the family room, while our parents gathered in the living room. When we were playing, we heard that my aunty told that something wrong with the result of our picture that we took earlier, because we were curios, we went to the living room and gathered with our parents. Mison’s mom showed us the picture, and I was shocked, because in the picture it showed that my head and my body were not connected, my mom face look alike an animal, April face look so different with the real face, behind all of us there were like a shadow, and Mison’s mom took a picture near the swimming pool, and behind of her there was footprints, while actually when she wanted to took a picture there she sure that there were no footprints there, my mom told that there were no footprints there. Then Angel’s dad borrowed Mison’s mom’s phone to saw the picture. Angel’s dad is indigo, and he said that there was some spirit that disturbed us when we were there, because “they” thought we went there to disturb them. Than Angel’s dad told us to always believe in God and get closer to Him.

My dad told us to go back to the hotel now, because tomorrow we will continue the journey in the morning, but then Allison told to our mom that she didn’t want to sleep at the hotel, because she was afraid. Angel’s mom told us to stay at her house. My dad agreed with it and allowed me and Allison to stay in angel house. Then Mison told to his mom that he wanted to stayed at Angel’s house too, and Mison’s dad also allowed Mison to stay at Angel’s house. After that Mison’s and my parents went back to the hotel.

The next day my parents and Mison’s parents came in the morning. We all had a breakfast together, and we gathered for a while, and then we said goodbye because we need to continue our journey. Then it took 2 days until we arrived back to our lovely city. After that experience we all try to get closer to God and worship Him, without the word “lazy” or “forced”.

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